Weep, yawp, weep, yawp,
O’ life, o’life, why doth thee exist?
Like a starry sky, where’s the cloudless clime?
In a day i born, in a night i fight.
I may , or might not?
Descry, descry, descry,
Listen to an aphony mumble,
For the dark i pray, for the solitude i stay.
Would thou let me be,
A shoreless sea,
Sleep in a nightmare
For a moon, i flee.
Would thou let me cry,
With a voice of prey,
Sentient in a daymare,
For a moon, i’ll die.
Thou mistaketh me,
Which didst lead me forth,
Beshrew me, if i hast my breath,
Despair i be, let darth findeth me.
©reserved .
this is a beautiful piece…
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Beautifully penned…… And as always has its own impact on the readers….. And it’s always effective….. Great work sahil…… Keep writing like this and yeah be happy and keep smiling…… 😃😃
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As beautiful as your comment,
Thank you, really means a lot , your appreciation,
God bless, :
Keep smiling 🙂
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Pleasure is all mine…… And thanks….. You too be happy and stay blessed….. Keep smiling…. 😃😃
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Beautifully penned. Thank you for visiting the English side of the blog http;//visualpoetrysylvieg.wordpress.com 🙂
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Thank you
God bless 🙂
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I’m not always a fan of olden day language usage in modern poetry, but with this subject matter it works very nicely! Not easy to pull off without sounding like a dictionary, you managed it well.
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Thanks a lot rob,
I really respect your appreciation,
The old touch is always good, it keeps up reminding about the past,
Thank you once again 🙂
God bless 🙂
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The dilapidated syntax really portrays the anguish of your words. Nicely done!
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I am really glad to hear that,
Thank you
God bless 🙂
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This is beautiful well written! I ❤ it!!
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Thank you so much
God bless 🙂
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You’re very welcome, God Bless 🙂
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This is amazing!👏
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Thank you 🙂
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A little sad but truly beautiful.
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Glad that you relate
Thank you
God bless 🙂
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Beautiful!!!
Check out my space also to experience the magic of letters!!!
Hope you will like it:)
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Hey thank you
Yes, sure 🙂
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☺️
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Okay, this is straight up Shakespearean.
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Whoa, shakespearen, i don’t really think that i’ve reached there yet, but you’ve made me insight that beautiful moment,
I lived it
Thanks a lot
God bless 🙂
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This was written so well. I’m not usually a fan of old-English but you really managed to pull it off.
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I am honoured to hear that,
I succeeded in reaching out to you, to pull it off.
Thanks lot😊
Stay blessed 🙂
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