Amidst the tainted fibs,
Obliterated all the light,
Blood seeped through the nibs,
Perdition to forget the might.
Swim into a reverie,
Lost the first ebbs,
Gloom and arbitrary,
Sombre; spider webs.
Beneath is deep, i know, i know the story of a deer ; cried for the days of aliveness , ran and ran and ran to jump off the cliff, but caught by the mighty tiger : Died an undead death.
Reticent: her voice,
Blue lies in adroit love,
Coruscating : beaut eyes,
Hark to the saga of lost dove.
“Dark i am, in grave i live,
Let me fall without a why,
Some take, some give,
Some laugh, some die.”
©reserved.
This is a masterpiece. ❤❤ An unsheathing so full of expertise. I am at a loss for words.
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Thanks for your appreciation,
Glad to have my readers like you,
God bless 🙂
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Win win buddy!!!
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This is brilliant.
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Keep it up! 🙂
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LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! Not only are there very trenchant and useful ideas here, but it also scans really well! I read it aloud and got goose-bumps, so you have achieved POETRY, and I am grateful.
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Achieved POETRY, thats a huge laudation i could ever get, really.
It gave me goosebumps while reading your comment,
I respect your appreciation, glad that you read and liked them.
Thanks a lot
God bless 🙂
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Beautiful composition…
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Thank you 🙂
God bless!:)
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🙂
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Something is still missing and that’s appreciation. ✨Great word.
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It was so beautiful, 🎈
Thank you
God bless 🙂
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MAY I REBLOG THIS ODE SO BEAUTIFUL??? AND ANY TO FOLLOW OR PRECEED? 🙂
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LOVE THIS. Great job!
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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Well done. I like your Ode. Very powerful.
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Thank you
🙂
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