Incarceration need an obscure voice,
Agony smiled to ambivalent cries.
Dreaded life to commit sin,
If an esoteric truth lives within.
Touch , let me live death,
Please hear me, the voided breath.
Realness rued over chicanery,
Hope clasped upon the dead fairy.
Slithered, the time i need love,
Shadows trusted an evil dove.
Love confides lies in the dark,
Belief hung fire to embark.
Feel , let me cry a smile,
Tears lived in exile.
Substance of ruthlessness made a dune,
Wolf howls again to the moon.
©reserved.
Sahil you simply blow away my mind with your words. There is pain yet hope underneath the words. Immense depth and feelings sublty expressed. 🙂
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Hey , thanks for relating 🙂
Glad that you liked it.
God bless 🙂
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I absolutely love this. Brilliant. Back in my more poetic days, this feels very much like something I could have written (in that I commiserate very much with its sentiment and I often would use similar word combinations and allegories). And, I love wolves (as I stare up and to my right at the picture of a wolf on my wall while writing this). This also expresses so much of how I have been feeling as of late. I can’t wait to read more of your work.
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Your this appreciation , really means a lot.
I am tattooed with a wolf, and i am really chuffed that you love them too , and can relate yourself to this piece like no one else.
Even i’ve written this while looking at my wolf. Thank you for you support, i’ll be posting new one momently.
God bless 🙂
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Good poem. I enjoyed reading it. Btw thanks for the like on my poem.
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Thanks
God bless 🙂
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Love, love, love!!!! So eerily beautiful!
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Wow , thanks a lot.
Really gleeful that you loved it,
God bless 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Very deep. Love the way you write 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
God bless 🙂
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hello, i enjoyed your blog thorouly. thats why i nominated you for the this award . its upto you if you accept or reject it https://glittergirl0010.wordpress.com/
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Hey,
Thanks for nominating me , i am really glad.
Yes , i’ll just check onto this.
God bless 🙂
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fantastic. i am especially moved by “Touch , let me live death,”
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Hey, thank you 😊
Glad you liked it
God bless 🙂
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very nice…
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Thanks 😊
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Thou shalt not mix verb tenses, saith the lordly poet, unless, one says, I read it, I like it, and will recommend it to all my friends.:)
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Thanks a lot,
It feels so good to hear this kind.
God bless 🙂
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Beautiful words….love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thanks ☺️
God bless 🙂
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Really enjoy your poetry, Sahil.
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I am glad to hear that ma’am,
Thank you
God bless 🙂
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Some respond to imagery conjured up by words … but I especially respond to the pictures. Brrrrr …
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Enthralling.
to take “A” breath, for youself… or, another
to have “THAT” cavity “FILLED” is the “WHAT” for.
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Wow, it was amazing
Thanks
God bless 🙂
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A GREAT BRAIN-WAVE should be RODE, or ENJOYED… YOU HAVE of BOTH.
“D”
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